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Post by annie12 on Jan 5, 2013 7:10:54 GMT -5
Must......know....what....happens....please write chapter 60!
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Post by NatKaya on Jan 5, 2013 16:45:18 GMT -5
I'm working on it
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Post by NatKaya on Jan 7, 2013 17:04:41 GMT -5
Chapter sixty- Chrissa *note, this chapter starts before "Snake! SNAKE!!!"* "Kanani!" I softly called as I knocked on her door. She came quickly, and we disappeared into my room. I explained the details of my detailed plan to get our pets back. Time passed, as we discussed it. "Snake! SNAKE!!!" Sonali shrieked from down the hall. I jumped up, ready to run to her rescue, but Kanani grabbed my hand and pulled me down. "Relax. Someone else must have heard her," she assured me. Skeptical, I listened for noise. Sure enough, I heard the sound of five pairs of pounding feet. "See?" she pointed out. "There they go." We sat there a bit, in silence. We conversed more over the Pet Plan. Then we decided to go tell someone. Kanani threw the door open, and we started to dash down the hall. Then I screamed. We were running right towards a woman with a snake!!! I tried to stop, and so did Kanani, but it was too late. CRASH!!!!!!!! The next thing I knew, it was hours later and Kanani and I were laying side by side on a bed... But not in a hospital... In my room. Later... Chapter sixty one- Sonali They had crashed. Kanani, wincing with the pain of a carpet-burned arm, and Chrissa laid silently on Chrissa's bed. "Chrissa," said Jess. "Chrissa." Chrissa's eyes opened a centimeter. She did not look extremely amused. Kanani whimpered. I imagine her arm hurt. "Kanani, come with me," Lanie said quietly. The two left Chrissa's room and slowly went up the hall until they got to the bathroom. The door locked with a click behind them. Chrissa groaned and tugged the blanket over her head. Just then, Mia ran in. She had stationed herself at the rec room door to watch for snake problems. "Great news, guys!" she exclaimed. "What, the snake is dead?" asked Kailey sarcastically. Mia shot her a look, then returned to her news. "The snake is gone!" she cried. "They flung it out the front door about three minutes ago!" Jess started doing some wacky victory dance. It must be a 2006 thing. Mia grinned, then left for her room. Then something came into the room. Something that had been taken away. Starburst. Meanwhile, in Kanani's closet... Barksee quietly slipped into his girl's room. After surveying the darkness, he determined that she wasn't there. Then Barksee hid in her closet. She was sure to find him there. Chapter sixty two- Gwen (midnight, the day before) The nurse took me in. Although I still couldn't actually do anything, I could hear a gasp of recognition. As the nurse set me down, I heard the other girl inhale, then pepper me with questions. "Gwen! What are you doing here?" she began. I then knew I was with McKenna. "What are the other girls doing? Is Saige back yet? What ARE you doing here?" Of course, I was unable to reply. McKenna continued with the questions until a doctor came in. He took me to a different room. As the shot approached my arm, I found I could do something. I screamed and screamed and screamed. What do you know, four parts for the price of one! (Which is free )
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Post by NatKaya on Jan 9, 2013 9:50:00 GMT -5
The next day.... (Two days after Gwen's chapter)
Chapter sixty three- Lanie One day Marisol came to my door. She looked at me. I yawned. She rolled her eyes and said, "Come on." She led me to her room, where Kailey, Jess, Nicki, Chrissa, and Sonali already sat. Mia came in, trailed by Saige. Marisol left a moment, then returned with Kanani. We sat in a semicircle on the floor. "What are we doing here?" Saige asked, breaking the silence. Marisol ran her gaze over us. "It's time."
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Post by NatKaya on Jan 9, 2013 10:10:57 GMT -5
Chapter sixty three- Kananï Mia was one of the few that didn't seem confused. I thought about it. Time for what? Then it dawned on me. The Dancing Plan. "Teams of two," Marisol instructed. "Mia and I will be one; we're after my things and she made the plan." Nicki looked crestfallen. Chrissa linked hands with Sonali, but Sonali looked like she was thinking of someone. Probably Gwen. Lanie, looking tired, smiled at me. I nodded. Of course we'd be partners. This left Saige, Nicki, Kailey, and Jess. They glanced at each other. "Kailey with Jess, Nicki with Saige," Marisol announced, obviously not eager to wait for them to decide theirselves. "Line up!" she yelled. She and Mia stood next to the door. Mia glanced back at us, a little nervous. We followed them down the hall- Kailey and Jess, Nicki and Saige, Chrissa and Sonali, and finally Lanie and me. Then Mia peeked into the office. "Black Star, go!" she called, unless it was Marisol. Jess came up quickly, and unscrewed the door from its hinges, probably because we didn't have the key. Wait- where did Jess get the screwdriver? Then it was too late to turn back. The door nearly fell- Kailey and Jess leaned it against the wall. Nicki prayed that it'd stay. And then we were in.
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Post by NatKaya on Jan 9, 2013 10:11:37 GMT -5
*facepalm* put those both as chapter sixty three...
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Post by NatKaya on Jan 9, 2013 14:59:41 GMT -5
Chapter sixty five- McKenna Screaming. I heard Gwen screaming. Even though it had happened ages ago, the scream never left my ears. Gwen was going to be going home soon, probably in the morning, so I was going to be alone again. I hated being alone. It was so dull and dreary. Gwen sat up on her bed and looked at me. "McKenna," she said, "I have to tell you something."
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Post by annie12 on Jan 11, 2013 15:29:52 GMT -5
Nice chapters I just read them because at first I forgot and then there were weird words
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Post by NatKaya on Jan 11, 2013 15:40:27 GMT -5
Yeah, it was really weird when there were weird words.
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Post by Abigail on Jan 12, 2013 23:06:08 GMT -5
Awesome! Poor Gwen, I hope she's okay!
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Post by NatKaya on Jan 15, 2013 15:14:14 GMT -5
^ also, the shot from the hospital was an antidote Warning, the following chapter is very long Chapter sixty six- Saige Jane looked around, making sure we all were ready for the plan I hadn't been informed of until about fifteen minutes ago. The door was down. As Hailey and Bess struggled to lean it against the wall, next to me Mickey prayed that it wouldn't fall. That could ruin it all. Jane pulled Zia in, and she was followed by our groups of two- Hailey and Bess, Mickey and me, and Maine and Marani. Missa and Malari stayed outside the doorway, standing watch. Mickey, Maine, Marani, and I stood against the wall, ready to move if something happened. Bess snuck forward. After scouting for a while, she called Jane, Zia, and Hailey over. She showed them a pile of boxes. Jane shrieked in joy, then slapped her palm over her mouth. Marani went on alert for a minute, but no one was coming. She relaxed. Meanwhile, Hailey lifted a box, and grunted quietly- it was heavy. As she and Bess slowly carried two boxes to the doorway, by us, Jane inspected the rest, nodding eagerly as she recognized the names on the labels. Bess deposited her box by Maine and Marani, while Hailey gave hers to Mickey and I. As Maine and Marani started opening their box, I looked at the label on ours. "Marisol's Performance Trunk," the label declared. "Marisol?" I wondered. I didn't know anyone named Marisol... Did I? "Marisol?" I said, questioningly. Mickey looked at me and nodded. "Marisol and Mia set up this whole thing to retrieve Marisol's collection." I looked back at Jane- er, Marisol- as she and the others conferred over the remaining boxes, while Mickey tore into our box. "Wow, no wonder this was so heavy!" I exclaimed, noticing the size of the trunk inside. Mickey laughed. "Now help me lift it out," she said. After we got it out, Marisol, Zia, Hailey, and Bess returned over to us, carrying other parts and pieces of Marisol's collection. When they saw us coming out, Missa and Malari put the door back on its hinges. As we returned to Marisol's room, carrying her world, I couldn't help but feel proud that I had helped. We placed each item in its proper place. Looking around, the room felt whole again. And I was happy. (But it's not over yet! There are at least two or three more chapters before the end!)
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Post by annie12 on Jan 15, 2013 15:30:08 GMT -5
Ooooh! I am wondering what happens next..
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Post by NatKaya on Jan 15, 2013 15:33:49 GMT -5
I'm trying to decide who narrates the next chapter- keep it in order and do Kailey, or do Marisol or Gwen... Deciding may take a few minutes.
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Post by NatKaya on Jan 15, 2013 15:43:13 GMT -5
It's going to be Gwen. Chapter up soon.
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Post by NatKaya on Jan 15, 2013 15:57:11 GMT -5
Chapter sixty seven- Gwen McKenna and I were back at the GotY building. I paced the hall, listening as Kailey and Marisol moved Kailey's things into their soon to be shared room. It wasn't too hard.. just clothes, her accessories, a surfboard '03 style, and a towel... except for Sandy. Sandy was being difficult. I imagine she wasn't too thrilled with the prospect of moving in with a cat. As I turned to walk down in the direction of the rec room, Saige tapped me on the shoulder. I spun around. Holding her art pad, Saige whispered, "I was hoping you could help me." We went to my room, and she showed me a picture. "You see," she said, "there's Mia, Marisol, McKenna, Kailey, Kanani, Jess, Nicki, Chrissa, Sonali, you, and Lanie. But who's she?" Saige asked, pointing towards a doodle that almost made me cry. "The first GotY," I sniffled. "Lindsey." Seeing how sad I seemed, Saige took her art pad. "Thank you," she whispered. And then she left.
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