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Post by NatKaya on Dec 24, 2012 14:58:58 GMT -5
A preview:
2013 has dawned. The newest GotY has moved into Lindsey's old room. When one day, Marisol is attacked when returning to her room from the rec room, and her things are all stolen, the GotY's gather to help her. But ----- doesn't like the other GotY's, and thinks they're old-fashioned, even McKenna. She doesn't want to help them. And McKenna has (er, will be) entered (entering) a stage of severe depression! Will the GotY's be able to recover Marisol's things? Find out in TMOM.
Starting Wednesday right here on Viviness and AG!
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Post by Delaney on Dec 24, 2012 15:01:00 GMT -5
I CAN'T WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT'S AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by NatKaya on Dec 24, 2012 15:04:25 GMT -5
;D ;D ;D
The next story, starting Wednesday, is codenamed TMOM. I don't know what the first M stands for. I'm actually still writing it, but so far it's longer than the one already posted here.
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Post by NatKaya on Dec 24, 2012 16:16:15 GMT -5
A commercial for this series:
McKenna's picture appears on your television screen.
"McKenna. You know her as American Girl's Girl of the Year 2012. But did you ever wonder how she fared after her GotY status? Find out here. Along with-" the girls' pictures are shown onscreen as they are named- "KAILEY, Girl of the Year 2003; MARISOL, Girl of the Year 2005; JESS, Girl of the Year 2006; NICKI, Girl of the Year 2007; MIA, Girl of the Year 2008; CHRISSA, Girl of the Year 2009, with her friends SONALI and GWEN; LANIE, Girl of the Year 2010; KANANI, Girl of the Year 2011; and SAIGE, Girl of the Year 2013, McKenna experiences tradgedy and triumph" the screen shows every GotY, including Lindsey- "as they prevail over those who possess the power to make them disappear forever." The girls' pictures vanish one by one. "Through hurricanes, kidnappings, thefts, and broken legs, the girls must stay strong. Can they do it? Find out in THE GIRLS OF THE GotY BUILDING, only on V&AG Network. Season one, which just ended, was titled TKOK. Starting Wednesday, season two, TMOM, will be broadcasted live across the world to those lucky people who access this channel." Pictures of the GotY's and their adventures flash across the screen during that part. The credits run, while you hear, "No restrictions apply, this story is only available on the Viviness and AG messageboard, brought to you by Proboards. Thank you for watching this commercial."
The commercial ends.
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Post by mandy on Dec 24, 2012 21:07:24 GMT -5
OMG. I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! WRITE MORE PLEASEEEEEE ;D
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Post by NatKaya on Dec 24, 2012 21:10:06 GMT -5
The next story is startingWednesday if I can get to it. cause of Christmas it'll start late.
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Post by NatKaya on Dec 24, 2012 21:14:20 GMT -5
But because everyone wants it ;D ;D ;D I'll post the prologue now.
Prologue Marisol was heading back to her room after a vigorous ballet session in the rec room. Suddenly, a guard popped out of the office and punched her. She ran away from him, back to her room. That's when she got a shock- her room was empty!
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Post by NatKaya on Dec 25, 2012 16:00:02 GMT -5
I know, I know, weak beginning... But it gets better! Also, tell Gwen she should beware of snakes. (That may be a spoiler.)
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Post by annie12 on Dec 25, 2012 16:02:54 GMT -5
Chrissa: BEWARE OF SNAKES,GWEN!
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Post by NatKaya on Dec 25, 2012 16:04:23 GMT -5
Gwen... Oh Gwen... Chapter forty... Snake... Beware....
(Also, security check, NO, I do NOT travel for work, I don't even work! Sheesh.)
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Post by NatKaya on Dec 25, 2012 21:37:03 GMT -5
Surprise Christmas present! I'm starting today! Chapter one- Marisol I didn't know what to do. My room was empty, I had no clothes to wear except my Ballet Outfit, and that guard knocked my tooth out! Jess sat with me on my bed, one of the few things that hadn't been removed from the room. We stared at the eerie emptiness. The other girls offered to let me borrow their clothes. I sighed. For the second time since I became a GotY, Rascal was gone. My little kitty was missing again. Jess scowled. "They can't get away with this! This just isn't right! If it weren't for you, the GotY line would never have survived! And look! Just look! Ugh!" Nicki agreed. "Yeah! If they don't bring back your things, I'll, I'll... GO ON STRIKE! I won't go to any of Miss La-Dee-Da Saige's oh-SO-important events! I won't do anything! Ugh with AG!!!" "Let's start a riot!" yelled Lanie. "YEAH!" they all yelled. I just blinked. McKenna visited my room and gave me her fancy blue and pink dress to wear. I smiled at her. But would I ever wear my own clothes again? And when would I see Rascal? Chapter two- Jess Me, Nicki, and Lanie decided to get the other GotY's to join us in a riot to retrive Marisol's things. First we visited Kailey, who agreed on the spot, probably remembering the Hurricane Incident last fall. Slowly we built up a force of girls. Then Lanie knocked on the last door. Saige opened it, and glared at us. "What?" she said, as if we were wasting her time. "Saige, could you help us? Marisol, your next door neighbor, has lost everything. Her whole world was stolen. We're starting a riot to reverse this. Will you join us?" Saige sneered. "Of course not! I have things I need to do more important than retriving some 90 year old doll's stuff!" And she slammed the door in our faces. "Marisol isn't ninety! 2005 was only eight years ago!" Nicki yelled. "Nicki, she isn't listening to you," I told her. "She's really rude!" commented Kanani. I shook my head in disgust. What was wrong with her? Chapter three- Nicki I didn't care! AG stole our things and cut our wrists and took us away! Like what they did to Kailey last fall! I'm sick of it! I'm on strike! I quit! I don't care about Miss Snob or her SO important events! I'm going to stay right here in my room until AG relents! Marisol did nothing to them! In fact, if not for her, the GotY line might have been cancelled! That'd be freaky weird- there'd be no me... But anyway, I, Nicki Fleming, am on strike until Marisol's things are returned! You hear, AG? Later that day... Chapter four- Mia Nicki said she was on strike and wouldn't leave her room. I said she still needed to eat. Since we weren't allowed to take the plates out of the dining room, I found some clothes I didn't wear much anymore- the sweater from my skating outfit. When they sent the plates of dinner down the table- it was pizza- I took Nicki's slice and hid it in the sweater. Then I ate mine. Worrying about Marisol's things could make one very hungry! After dinner, I headed to Nicki's room. She gobbled the pizza down. I guess Nicki was starving! We talked for a while, and then I went to wash the sweater. While in the laundry room, I saw something that no one could have expected. Chapter five- Chrissa Some pizza sauce squirted onto my favorite dress, so after dinner, I changed and headed to the laundry room. I saw Mia. Mia looked surprised, and also slightly shocked. She walked to an empty spot behind some dryers. I followed her. There, we both got a surprise. It was Saige, quietly crying to herself. "What's wrong, Saige?" I asked. She sniffled, and looked up at us with a tear-streaked face "You all hate me!" she cried. Oh, it leaves off here! CLIFFHANGER!!!! Too bad the next chapter's Sonali...
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Post by NatKaya on Dec 25, 2012 21:39:53 GMT -5
Oh, you're going to need this:
A guide to the mixed up names
By the GotY's whose names Saige mixed up
Hailey: Kailey Bess: Jess Mickey: Nicki Zia: Mia Missa: Chrissa Malari: Sonali Hen: Gwen Maine: Lanie Marani: Kanani Loretta: McKenna
And now the most surprising (and funny):
Saige thought Marisol's name was Jane!
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Post by NatJaya on Dec 26, 2012 9:55:19 GMT -5
Chapters 6-10: (lokk above for 1-5)
Chapter six- Lanie I nibbled my pizza boredly. It was not the world's best day. I was almost alone in the dining room, except for good old Kanani. She hadn't even touched her pizza yet. Kailey had left with Marisol, talking so fast we had hardly heard them. McKenna, who had been wearing her practice leotard, went to the rec room to practice gymnastics. Mia had run out, after snarfing down her pizza and stealing Nicki's. Jess and Sonali left together, whispering quietly. Gwen left, followed by Chrissa, who was moaning about her favorite dress. Saige ran out the second she finished her pizza. And Nicki? She didn't even show up! Just then, there was a loud crashing noise. From the rec room.
Chapter seven- KananĂ¯ This is the last straw. First they do what they did to Lindsey, then they steal Kailey, then they take Marisol's world. Now they break McKenna's leg! When we heard the crash, and the scream, Lanie and I ran out. We ran into Sonali, Jess, and Kailey as we rushed to the rec room. McKenna's eyes were squeezed shut with pain, and her leg was bent at an awkward angle. She was on the floor by the beam. The mat was missing.
Chapter eight- McKenna Kailey and Lanie carried me to my room, where Sonali, Kanani, and Jess threw all my clothes on the bed. Kailey and Lanie set me down. Jess ran out to the office. After some time, she returned, shaking her head. "They refuse to take her to a hospital," she told the others. "What are we going to do? What are we going to do? WHAT are we going to DO?" cried Kailey, pacing. "What ARE we going to do?" Kanani pointed out. "I wish Kaya were here! I bet SHE'D know what to do!" whined Lanie. "Or maybe Josefina," considered Sonali. "But they're NOT here. WE need to do something. But what?" Jess said. Just then, a pain zoomed like a shot up my leg. I screamed. Then the world went black.
Chapter nine- Saige Those GotY's weren't nice! They may not remember from their years, but I am forced to do so many, many things by AG. Just about every week, one of their stores just has to have me come in for an event or an interview or a live television show. They just have to get my movie filmed right now. They just have to get me on the news and the morning shows with all the major networks. They just have to have me do this or go here or sign that. It's really stressful. So when I talked like that to Maine like that- weird that her name is a state, isn't it?- I was really stressed out. I can't really take the time for anything anymore because of AG. It's all their fault. And now, with Missa and Zia acting like I'm their closest friend who has had something overly traumatic happen to her, my life couldn't get any more hectic. So that's why I was hiding behind the dryers. I needed to get away. From everything.
Chapter ten- Kailey Lanie searched the building. Finally, she returned to McKenna's room, with two dowels in her hand. She ripped a strip off McKenna's pillowcase, and tied the dowels to McKenna's leg. "Ah," said Kanani, "a splint." Lanie nodded. Then McKenna screamed. "I thought she fainted," Sonali whispered to Jess. Jess shrugged. The rest of us stared at McKenna. "What?" she asked. We all laughed. "I don't get it," said McKenna. "Oh, McKenna," giggled Kanani. "You GotY's make no sense," said McKenna. "But McKenna," I said, "YOU'RE a GotY!" We laughed some more. "Sigh," said McKenna.
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Post by NatKaya on Dec 26, 2012 16:38:14 GMT -5
Bye, I'm off to write chapter forty five!
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Post by NatKaya on Dec 27, 2012 17:32:09 GMT -5
I hope they don't mention PiE.
Chapter eleven- Marisol There I was, in the empty room. I was so entirely bored. There is nothing more boring than when you've got an empty room. I decided to go find something to do. Walking down the hall, I heard commotion from one room and crying from another. Then I heard a hiss from the office. A crash. The door burst open. I paused. Standing near Mia's door, I saw something I never thought I'd see again. My little kitty was running up the hall towards me. I hugged him. And time just paused.
Chapter twelve- Jess McKenna broke her leg. This could be bad. Luckily, Lanie provided a splint, much to the dismay of McKenna's pillowcase. I left McKenna's room with Kailey and Sonali. We were going to let McKenna rest, while Lanie and Kanani got something or other for her. That's when I saw, down by Mia's room, Marisol. She was kneeling in the hall, hugging something. Kailey ran ahead to see what. "Yes!" she cried. "Huh?" asked Marisol, glancing up. "Meow?" asked the thing she was hugging. Sonali and I stared at each other. Then we ran up to Kailey and Marisol. "Yay!" cried Sonali happily. Marisol wasn't just hugging anything- she was hugging Rascal! Her cat had been taken away with everything else in her room. I smiled. This could be the key we needed to finding Marisol's world.
Chapter thirteen- Nicki I had spent hours lying on my bed. Truth be told, it was getting boring. Mia brought me pizza in her sweater, and I ate it. We talked, and she left to wash the sweater. Then I laid there some more. I wasn't sure how long I could do this. Laying there all day was incredibly boring. But when I heard cries of "Yes!" and "Yeah!" I decided to investigate. The noise was right outside my door. Kailey, Sonali, and Jess celebrated, while Marisol hugged something that purred in reply. Her cat was returned to her! "Hooray!" I cried. "This is great!"
Chapter fourteen- Mia "Leave me alone, Zia," said Saige, turning her back on me and Chrissa. We glanced at each other. "Why?" Chrissa asked. Looking back at us, Saige explained, "You see, Missa, you all think you know everything. You don't. You don't know how busy I am. You don't know what AG has me do. And I'm sure you don't know what that noise in the hall is!" Listening, I heard celebrating sounds. "Just a moment," I told them. Chrissa followed me to the door, and we peeked out. Four other GotY's danced and cheered around a fifth, kneeling on the floor. We rushed over. Then we saw- Marisol had found her cat. We got excited too. This might be a crucial turning point in the recovery of her things.
Later that day...
Chapter fifteen- Chrissa We were having a GotY meeting. Saige couldn't come because AG Place Dallas wanted her in for an interview first thing in the morning, and she was on a plane there. We would be in McKenna's room, due to her broken leg. McKenna was on her bed. Lanie and Kanani were already there when Sonali, Gwen, and I arrived. Then Kailey and Marisol showed up, with Jess tagging along. We waited for a while, and finally, Nicki and Mia arrived. We climbed up the ladder on McKenna's loft bed one by one. She smiled weakly and moved over a bit. After we were all up, Kailey tapped the side of the bed, to make sure we were paying attention. "Yes?" asked Nicki. Mia giggled. Jess cleared her throat. "Okay. We have three matters of business to deal with. First matter: Marisol." She looked in the direction of the girl with the cat. Rascal purred. "Well, I'm happy to announce that Rascal has returned," Marisol began. Everyone cheered. "How did you get him back?" asked Lanie, after the cheering had subsided. "I was walking down the hall in boredom. Then, from the office, I heard a cat's hiss, and a crash. The door burst open, and Rascal ran out," Marisol explained. Then Jess said, "We have Rascal now." She was interrupted by a loud, "MEOW." "But now we have to get the rest of her things." "Second matter," said Mia, "Saige. Saige thinks we hate her. So she acts mean to us. We need to be nice to her so she'll be nice to us. It's that simple." Sonali and Gwen nodded. "Third matter: McKenna," said Lanie. "Huh?" asked McKenna sleepily. Kailey and Kanani giggled. "McKenna fell off her beam. The mat was missing," said Lanie. "I went back to the rec room later, because I knew McKenna wouldn't just fall. She's too good at gymnastics to fall. That's when I discovered- the beam was oiled!" added Kanani. We gasped. Who'd hurt McKenna?
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